If you think this comic is better than my real one because of all the color games and avant garde camera angles, think again. I was trying to spoof Sin City. And I never read Sin City, so my only frame of reference was the movie, which (in case you couldn't tell) I had just watched. If I had to come up with these on my own, they'd be much lamer.
Take a moment to look at the eyes. I like these normal eyes a lot better than Out of Character's cartoony eyes, but I couldn't draw their details right with the thick pen I use for the final ink. Maybe I should get a better pen, but I'm too ignorant about drawings.